[mr.pilot]

اقتباس:     المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة الطيار : متعب  

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Al salam alikom wa rahmat allah wa brkatoh

Hello . my name is meteb I live in Saudi Arabia . tabuk I study in Othman bin affan school I love my school ( not so much ) and I like science subject it's my favorite subject and my best hobbies are painting , sporting and use a computer . I like aviation world it's a best world ever see . and my future wish is be a pilot it's a best work in the world and the strongest . and I wish see you pilots in the future too . and I want of you all translation this dictation and I will give the winner in this game a gift , and the gift is a product key for flight simulator x acceleration … thank you I love you all guys.......

Note : remember if you translate this dictation I will give you a gift ( product key ) >

Meteb : the pilot ) )

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يلا يلا أبغا منكم التفاعل مع الموضوع :iconloli:

whassup my man muteb!!? a
i dont wanna let ya dawn but do see all hightlighted things above? they're mistakes you made and you need to orgnize your writing as well.
if want to know why and what's correct just let me know and i help ya out.
by the way, i improved my english by knowing my mistakes.
overall you did great job